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I see you on the screen    you see me
we see each other
you’re propped up on the tip of your elbow, and
I repeat “do you like my hair” twice
“my connection is weird” you apologize

I nod and wave it away
start to think about the billions of pixels
making up your face    the hallway out your door
and the very white page I’m writing on
running their weary track on the hyper-super-highway
little Marathons running and running

bursting forth on a screen, rushing forth with the
great importance of one that brings light
©2009-2010 ~ruffienne
:iconruffienne:

Author's Comments

NaPo 5. So far so good. Kinda like this one, too.
I guess this is Cyber Poetry? New categories are new.
Also, anyone else think it's BS that now only subscribers can ask for critique? It's BS.


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